Group Meetings

Today's class time consisted of group meetings!!!!

I got with a few people from other groups and we discussed everyone's projects, and more specifically we helped each other develop and critique our own ideas in order to get outside perspective on what may work and what may not.

Rewrites

Today the groups pointed out a pretty large plot hole, that being that the giant planet in the sky would probably raise concerns a little quicker than depicted in our opening. Who knew people would want to run for their lives when they see a giant planet about to crash into earth? Either way this plot hole called for some obvious rewrites (something I'm sure our script-writer is thrilled about). So far the plan is to make it more apparent why the panic is only now starting at the beginning of our opening, since it wouldn't make sense for people in a grocery store to just randomly fall into group hysteria and panic attacks, even though that sounds like its own sick story. Anyway that's all from me, ill get back to you guys with the final script in my next blog post :)